s_楚北 2007-11-4 15:10
以前写的 北羽集
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mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">起袖遮面. 角徵声外合绫忆,举觥轻点伽蓝雪,伽蓝雪,子规依稀,栀花开半. </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"><2></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"> 浪淘沙</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">依窗嗅阑干</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">洒尽流沙</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">寻纸泼墨描西风</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">燕斜觅得竹喧绕</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">以上三更. 旧树蔽房后</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">笑影散乱</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">残月与烟舞屋甍</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">枯藤拦柱石椅叹</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">女墙安在</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">? </font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"><3> </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">青玉案</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">浑浑噩噩别素烛</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">轻顿步</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">与烟送</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">残红片片芳菲后</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">阶尘厚厚</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">惹起尘飞树. 石入泉中花溅泪</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">点起三香祭斗牛</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">回眸三秋轻叩首</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">一碗离愁</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">两处伤痛</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">酿满黄梅酒</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">.</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"><4> </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">少年游</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"> 恨叶划风</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";">悢然去兮,黄纸坟惆怅.一坡故乡,瓦枯半晌,蝶落沉花舟. 伽蓝夜空朱雀笼,陨星山腰后.反复枕落,衾薄影碎,脉脉风箜篌.</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"><5> </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"> 采桑子</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"> 翠竹梢头遇焦黄,轻起玉露.办湿衣袖,盈盈叶指天外后. 根须盘虬出笼口,挥毫落青.点划绛唇.云觅林喧云也愁.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"><6> </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"> 千秋岁</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"> 微起星痕,花颜苦笑秋.若风至,掌击衰,默念饮蜡泪,悲欢举空樽.舞桃影,秋去来回桥也悴. 闻袖残余香,百步亭依稀.雨中埃,与谁栽?今忆撒湖边,去去又西来.莫归徕,岁岁南关法如海.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"><7> </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"> 踏莎行</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"> 风风北吹,雁雁西归.泊滩依稀应有泪,挨得地溢花为被.叩扉犬吠未见醉. 手长年岁,手心枯萎.拇指向西杆栏悴,阶阶青翠苔无罪,波波涟漪向南北.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman"><8></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"> 鹊桥仙</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-hansi-font-family: "Times New Roman";"> 古井道旁,长街如弓,谁家篱笆窗外.羁客拾瓦帘外看,摧狂风,旋作幽暗. 村口酒坛,未闻他香,不堪筝声莫换.敲樽听音念四海,女儿红,无味销憾</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></p></span></p>
琥珀叶脉 2007-11-6 09:37
<p>好词。特别是少年游。</p><p>不过好像韵脚有点乱?</p>
s_楚北 2007-11-9 16:41
<p>初中快毕业的时候赶出来的</p><p>主要是为了应付 那个 校友录</p><p>所以 有的质量不高 </p><p>恩 就这样</p>
┌.Loading 2007-11-9 19:21
很棒 少年游 特别赞
s_暮雪芳菲 2007-11-9 19:37
<p>文学版的文学青年</p><p>……</p><p>厉害呢</p>
s_楚北 2007-11-9 20:59
<p>说起少年游,最近闲着没事写了个小东西</p><p>看看</p><p></p><p></p><p>少年游 游年少</p><p>我与风回楼西 西楼回风与我</p><p>柳拂南江 江南拂柳</p><p>月弦影随孤鸿 鸿孤随影弦月</p><p>殇女歌 歌女殇</p><p>休不言 言不休</p><p>泪空流 流空泪</p><p>任谁堪古千万 万千堪古谁任</p><p>雁飞去来 来去飞雁</p><p>尽哀茫茫 茫茫哀尽</p><p>少年游 游年少</p>
s_楚北 2007-11-9 23:35
我想发个贴好词的贴 在哪发好呢?
┌.Loading 2007-11-10 15:43
<p>去文学版发吧</p><p>孩子 你真是太有才了 让你进交响真没错</p>
s_楚北 2007-11-17 20:25
真的谢谢了 <鬼方狼> 争取出来